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发布时间:2019-01-18 北京超级学长
年初考试的宝宝们
一月份的口语题库已经更新完成
这么多新题目你们都准备好了吗?
话题精讲:
Describe an intelligent person you know
名师语料:
The person I’d like to talk about is Jason who was my classmate when I was studying in junior high back to a few years ago. In fact, I think he is by far the smartest person I know.
Jason is the same age with me, but he looks a bit mature than his real age. To be honest, this is a bit unfortunate, but he seems to be quite happy about it because it makes him looks sophisticated. Besides, he was quite athletic, that’s also the reason why he was really popular among girls in my school. Actually, now he becomes a bit overweight since he had to sit around in front of the desk because of his job.
If I recall correctly, it was the second week after we began the first semester in our school. Both of us were living in the dormitory and there was no air conditioner but an old ceiling fan there. To be honest, the living condition was terrible and there was nothing we can do to change it. The bed we were sleeping in were a bit special, it was on the second level of a desk. So that none of us could enjoy the fan. I didn’t know what to do but to complain about it. He was different. He put an umbrella on the other side of the wall so that it could blow the wind back to us. To be completely honest, the effect was excellent and the way he solved it was really smart. At least I couldn’t think of something that effective. So that’s why I think he is an intelligent person.
名师点评:
“大家在描述一个人的时候,都在想人物之间发生的事情,但是实际上人物的外貌以及性格同样非常重要,平时做一定的人物性格外貌积累也是很有必要的,再列举案例时,千万不要使用范例,一定是个例结合,这样才会有更好的效果。
小超观点 :
同学们千万不要死记硬背答案范本,更多是结合实际情况去发挥出自己,所谓书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟,大家好好备考,加油!