题目彭群花老师就为雅思考生们带来2015年1月10日雅思写作大作文解析。
老题:Some people think that the company should encourage the employees who are in high positions and over 55 years old to retire, in order to give opportunities to new generation. Do you agree or disagree?
这里提供两段主干论证段供烤鸭们参考:
【小鲜肉的优势】
Young people are superior to the old in many ways. First, most young people have received formal education in university, where they acquire abundant knowledge and skills. Compared with young people, old people’s knowledge is out-dated, which does not fit in the development of the current society. Second, young people are more open-minded than old people who have a tendency of conservation.Young people can adapt themselves to the changeable world more easily. Finally, the young are energetic and vigorous. Old people react more slowly than young people who can always make quick judges and prompt decisions.
年轻人在某些方面比年长的人更有优势。先,大多数年轻人在大学接受过正式的教育。在那里他们获取丰富的知识和技能。相比较年轻人而言,年长的人的知识显得过时了,使其不能适应现代社会的发展。其次,年轻人比那些具有计划守意识的年长的人思想更加开放。年轻人可以让自己更轻松地在多变的世界中生存。后,年轻人具有充沛的精力和活力。年长的人则比那些可以经常做出快速判断和及时决定的年轻人反应慢。
【大叔的优势】
Some people who examine this issue from another angle hold although young people have some predominance they still cannot compete with the old people. First, young people lack adequate experience and skills to deal with sophisticated problems. Some young people, who are very radical when faced with trouble, have a lot of things to learn from old people and most high positions require rich experience and academic achievements. Second, age is not always a true indicator of one’s capacities and thanks to the improvement in medical science, people enjoy a much longer life expectancy, so we should redefine the term”old age”. Finally, it would be more economical for the company to retain the old hands than to spend more time and money training new ones.
一些人则从另一个角度看待这个问题,他们认为虽然年轻人占主要优势,但他们仍然不能和年长的人竞争。先,年轻人缺少足够的经验和处理复杂问题的技能。一些年轻人,当他们面对一些麻烦时过于激进,他们有很多东西需要向年长的人学习,许多高层职位需要丰富的经验和学术成就。其次,年龄并不总是一个人能力的真实反映。感谢医药科学的进步,人们可以有更长的寿命,所以我们应该重新定义“年老”这个概念。后,对于公司而言,雇佣老手比花更多钱和时间来培训新手更加经济实惠。
选择自己更喜欢的角度,某些理由还可以稍加扩展,然后推出相应的结论。一篇雅思大作文就这样产生咯!对于年轻人和老年人对比的话题也是雅思或托福写作中常常涉及的话题。
【历年的相关考题】
政府重要职位是否由年轻人担当好不好
More and more young people hold important positions in government. Some people think it is not suitable but others think otherwise. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
老龄化社会利弊
The trend of the proportion of older people is increasing steadily. Is it positive or negative to society?
The survey shows that in many countries, the people are living longer but increased life expectancy has many implications for the aging individuals and for society as a whole. What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society? How can we solve it?
年轻人厌学
Many young people leave school with a negative attitude. Why does this happen? What do you think can encourage young people to have a positive attitude?
年轻人犯罪
Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Why is this happening? Please give some solutions.
政府资助年轻人
The best way for a country to prepare the future is to invest more resources on its young people. What is the best way to spend resources? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
以上就是写作名师为雅思考生们带来的2015年1月10日雅思写作大作文解析。