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2013年11月30日雅思A类大作文范文

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为大带来2013年11月30日雅思A类大作文范文。Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
2013年11月30日雅思A类大作文范文
为大带来2013年11月30日雅思A类大作文范文。

题目:More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

(Word count=291)

 

范文:

To better address the topic of the public increasingly favouring famous brands, however what category the products fall into, the connotation of “famous” has to be spelt first: evidently, famous brands are not necessarily expensive, but in reality, most are.

 

The popularity of products, affordable or not, heavily relies on product publicity, which thoroughly saturates daily life. With life in the technological epoch, E-media, smart phones, PC’s, or other Internet-based media, have replaced radio and TV in branding and advertising in a prompt and effective manner. Meanwhile, word of mouth proves to be powerful as everyone is entitled to their opinions and able to share their verdicts with modern communication tools.

 

To guarantee positive publicity and maintain their prestige, producers have come to the understanding that quality and service are winning cards. The claim can be safe that most well-known products merit praise, be it for manufacturing history, choice of materials/ingredients, or product efficacy. Thus, the good name of a product and its quality track along, especially when the product has been on the market for a relatively longer period.

 

However, problemsarise when famous products are purchased by consumers with different psychologies and financial backgrounds. When people have to save, to bankrupt themselves, or even resort to illegal means to “afford” something high-end, the consuming behaviours are naturally harmful. Moreover, people lean to big brands because of the belief that certain bands are equal to higher social status. In that case, the purchase is insensible and most likely vanity-oriented; personal finances and social values are in jeopardy.

 

In sum, product quality and publicity induce recognition, and the pursuit of famous brands can be in harm’s way if individual finances and the real needs for purchase are not taken into consideration.

 

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雅思A类小作文秘籍之“葵花宝典”

       小作文准则:

  · A. 不可能写的很好,关键是要很稳地写清楚。

  · B. 概括一些内涵关联性或原因推测作为总结

  开头句

  A.【bar graph/column graph直方图】【pie chart/饼状图】【line graph/曲线图】

  【solid line/实线】【break line/虚线】【dot line/点状线】

  【show/indicate/outline/illustrate】the general pattern of …

  B.【number/rate/percentage/figure】of …【rise/fall/increase/decrease/shoot up/decline】

  【dramatically/sharply/steadily/slightly/drastically/gradually】from in to in

  1. 描绘曲线: 【reach its peak/top/bottom/valley】【audiy.com】【remain the same】

  【level off/taper off】【fluctuate wildly/mildly】

  2. 数据组成:The total number is 100. Of this figure, 10 are A, 20 are B and 70 are C. Therefore, C accounts for the greatest number.

  3. 数据比照:A occupies only 5%, which stands in marked contrast to the 95% of B

  4. 数据升降:lose it attraction/become a general favorite

  5. 数据下降:10 percent of people preferred to do A in 1200, but only 5 percent of people stuck to the same preference in 1300.

  6. 最低数据:Each year/month, there were at least 5 people involved in …

  7. 数据挨近:The year 1200 saw the least difference between A and B.

  8. 数据关联:To sum up, the relation ship between A and B appear (inversely) proportional.

  9. 同向变化:The trend continues through out the graph.

  10. 事物归类:be categorized under 10 headings/be divided into 10 stages

  11. 两张图表: the first piece of data/ the second set of date

  数据翻倍:

  · A. It is 10 in 1200, but 30 in 1300,increased three times.

  · B. From just 100 in 1200 to over 4 times this amount in 1300.

  比较速度:

  · C.  In 1200, increase was spectacular, compared with 1300.

  · D.  A shows the greatest increase. B also shows an increase but it’s not as dramatic.

  阐述原因:

  · A. People’s preference for bicycle reflects public dissatisfaction with bus service.

  · B. From the difference between... , we can see the changes in our society and…

  · C.It appears that XXX directly affects the XXX-audiy.com

  · D. Obviously, people’s inclination to go out contributes to the decrease.

  展望未来:

  · A.There might be a tendency of decreasing in the future.

  · B.The tendency would be continuing because…

  Over the period from 1200 to 1300, the trend was towards a decrease in A, while there

  was an upward trend in B. There was a dramatic fall in A from 1205. However, from the

  year 1230 on, the rate of decrease slowed down and there was a more gradual reduction in A, reaching a figure of 10,000 in 1270. The number in B rose steadily, reaching 2000

  in 1210, to a peak of 4000 in 1290.

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