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发布时间:2018-12-26 重庆启德
今天我们介绍一种非常简单,但又能清楚的表达个人观点和主旨的写作方式。 以2018.3.3号的考题为例。
In many countries, prison is the common solution to the problem of crime. However, some people think that it would be more effective to provide people with better education so that they would not become criminals.To what extend do you agree or disagree?
这是一道典型的同意不同意的题目。如果考生仅仅写了 I agree/disagree this opinion.这样既没有清晰的观点也无法表达处后续主题段想表达的内容。在后续的段落写作中也容易跑题。
而我们所采取的方式很简单,用一个虽然但是的结构,不仅明确了观点,顺便连后续段落的主要内容都讲清楚了,可谓是一石二鸟。
Although imprisonment is an effective way to reduce crime, education makes it unnecessary for people to commit a crime.
这种的观点句的优势在于,首先,它清晰的表明了个人额观点是支持教育的,但又留有余地不至于单边没话说。其次,它也明确点明了后续主体段的两个的主要内容: 一段写为什么监禁减少犯罪,另一段写为什么教育会减少犯罪。 这样下来整个篇章结构清楚,主要内容直接首段呈现。对考官来说,能清楚的了解考生的作文要点。对考生自己来说,这样的方式也非常简单容易上手,避免了主体段和观点脱节的现象。
最后给大家一个二月的真考题目练习一下,看能不能快速的写出观点句。
More and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh its disadvantages for environment?(2.24真题)
It has been said that people who read for pleasure can have more developed imaginations and better language skills than people who prefer to watching TV.To what extend do you agreen or disagree?(2.10真题)
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