这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息

【答案】

Our class have had a discussion about web novels.

Some of my classmates consider that we can read web novels which are very interesting and can also open our views and improve our writing skills.

However, others do not agree. They think we shouldn’t do that, because there are too many web novels on the internet,  reading too much on the web is not good for eyesight. What’s worse, it’s easy to get the habit of reading web novels, that will affect not only our study but also our health and make our parents and teachers unhappy…

As for me, I don’t want to spend my limited time on web novels now, if I want, I will do that in summer holiday, and try to achieve balance between physical exercise and reading to protect my eyesight well.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息，来介绍一下同学们对网络小说的看法，我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。而且这些关于网络小说的看法所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，依次介绍了同学们及其自己对网络小说的看法，结构清晰，要点全面。而且作者在写作时，并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序，逐句翻译的，而是将这些信息进行了整合，让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达，这一点很好。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。如They think we shouldn’t do that, because there are too many web novels on the internet,  reading too much on the web is not good for eyesight. What’s worse, it’s easy to get the habit of reading web novels, that will affect not only our study but also our health and make our parents and teachers unhappy等。