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Dear Wang Bin,I’m glad to receive your letter, in which you asked me about how to be happy

2024-04-17 20:43:36    /    雅思学习    /    作者:周老师    /   
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Dear Wang Bin,I’m glad to receive your letter, in which you asked me about how to be happy

【题目】读者王彬写信给某杂志“开心”栏目记者Mary,询问怎么才会感到幸福,请根据提示给他写一封回信,主题为How to Be Happy。

提示:1. 幸福是人生最宝贵的东西;

2. 凭良心做事,善待他人;

3. 注重健康;

4. 遇到挫折时要保持乐观。

注意:1. 词数:150左右;

2. 根据提示适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Wang Bin,

I’m glad to receive your letter, in which you asked me about how to be happy.

 

 

 

【答案】

Dear Wang Bin,

Im glad to receive your letter, in which you asked me about how to be happy.  Im writing to tell you what I think about it.

In my opinion, happiness is the most precious thing in life. Without it, a man will feel discouraged and life will be dark and terrible. How to be happy then? Firstly, do everything out of conscience, and try to do it best, which will make yourself feel happy and satisfied. Secondly, treat others as you would have others do to you, that is to say, treat others sincerely. In addition, pay attention to your health, which is the root of success and happiness. Remember its no use being worried and sad. When you meet with some hard situation, you must try to overcome it without any hesitation. Last but not least, live every day in an optimistic way. If you share the ideas above with me, youll find your life is full of happiness all the time.

Best wishes.

Mary

【解析】

试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语in ones opinion 在某人看来;that is to say 也就是说;In addition此外;meet with遇到;share sth with sb与某人分享某物;Firstly, do everything out of conscience, and try to do it best, which will make yourself feel happy and satisfied.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句;Remember its no use being worried and sad.这个句子运用it is no use doing 做某事没用这个句型;

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