请根据下面要点， 以“The Grand Panda” 为题， 简要介绍大熊猫

【答案】

The Great Panda

The grand panda is one of the rare animals in the world. It is a treasure of our country. Believe it or not, at present only several thousand pandas exist in the world. Pandas live in the bamboo forests in the west and north of Sichuan Province. They feed on bamboo shoots and bamboo leaves. In the past few years, a large number of the bamboo forests have boon withered because of the unusually hot weather. A lack of food makes pandas on the point of dying out.

As a Chinese, we have the responsibility to do something to save pandas from dying out. Why not donate some money or do something nice to change this situation? You would be appreciated if you could offer any help.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文。给出的材料比较详细，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是单数第三人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。

【亮点说明】这篇短文能把握故事情节，能正确的运用一般现在时态。合理的利用连词短语，如Believe it or not，这使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理；这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，如at present、feed on、because of、have the responsibility to do等为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。