要求分析李雷抄作业的原因、危害并提出解决的方法

【答案】

Dear friend,

I am worried about you because I find you copy others` homework occasionally. It is agreed that we students have to do masses of homework both at home and at school. Sometimes we do have some problems, too hard to work out. Moreover, lazy and uninterested in our lessons, some students copy others` homework not only to finish the assignments but also please our teachers.

Copying other`s homework is a bad habit. For one thing, it is against the school rules. Being students, we should be honest and work hard. For another, copying others` homework too often, we will lose the ability that can help us to think. So I would like to give you some suggestions. You should firstly arrange your time and homework reasonably. At the same time, if you have difficulties, you can turn to teachers and classmates for help.

Yours LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类短文写作。要求分析李雷抄作业的原因、危害并提出解决的方法。这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

亮点说明：范文中高级句式的运用较好，如Copying other`s homework is a bad habit. 中的动名词短语做主语；所使用的连接词让文章成为一个整体，如For one thing,For another. at the same time等等。