被你拒绝后，他不再和你交往

【答案】

Dear Tom,

We have been good friends and I always value our friendship.I know good friends should help each other, but I had no choice but to refuse you when you asked me to help you cheat in the exam.First of all, cheating in the exam is strictly forbidden in our school.Whoever breaks the rule will be punished.Besides, cheating is dishonest, which, as students, we should never do.

I don’t want to lose you as my best friend.I think that a true friend is one who points out your shortcomings and helps you to overcome them.Only in this way can we make greater progress.I have made up my mind to help you with your study from now on.I’m sure if you work hard, you will do well in the exam.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇书信题材的书面表达，要注意以下几点：1.注意书信的格式，而且书信的语言要简洁明了，开门见山提出写信的目的。2.根据提示内容要把要求体现的要点写全，一共有三点要求。3.文章要使用一般现在时，使用第一人称。4.写信时语言要自然流畅，礼貌委婉，在内容方面可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯！

【亮点说明】本文书面表达格式正确，要点全面，语言自然流畅。文章中“but I had no choice but to refuse you when you asked me to help you cheat in the exam.”开门见山亮出了观点，并且使用First of all Besides等，使文章更流畅，Only in this way can we make greater progress.本句使用更是为文章增色不少！