注意： 1．词数100左右。2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

【答案】

Look around! Many of us become shortsighted, which without doubt has put us into great difficulty and has bad effects on our studies.  It isn’t hard to find the reasons.

First, we often spend too much time reading books, watching TV or playing computer games, making our eyes too tired. Second, there are some bad reading habits that make us have poor eyesight. For example, most of us like to read books while walking or lying on the bed.  Here are some useful suggestions that we can try. First, stick to

doing eye exercise.  Second , try to form good reading habits.  After reading for a long time, do have a rest by

looking at distant things. And when we read , we should keep the book 30 to 50 cm away from our eyes.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给要点，针对许多同学近视眼现象给我校英语报写一篇短文。

内容包括：1．导致近视的原因；2．如何保护视力。写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。文中所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求条理清楚，结构清晰，要点全面。而且作者在写作时，并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序，逐句翻译的，而是将这些信息进行了整合，让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的词汇和句式，增强了文章的连贯性。如定语从句、it做形式主语的使用；without doubt ,  has bad effects on , stick to等词汇和First, Second 等连接词等。