拥有16所分校和6,000多位学生的上海少年艺术学校规模大

【答案】

(One possible version): Spare-time Art Education in Shanghai

Tens of thousands of children is Shanghai are receiving art training in their spare time. More than 450 spare-time schools are helping the children in music, dancing, painting and calligraphy. Shanghai Children’s Art School, which has 16 branches and over 6,000 pupils, is the biggest of all.

Parents send their children to different schools according to their different interests.The children have learned a lot of new knowledge which cannot be learned from books.

Spare-time art schools are supported by many parents.This new kind of school will surely be run better and better.

【解析】

试题分析：文章是一篇提纲类作文，主要要点有：(1) 办校概况：全市现有业余艺校450多所。成千上万的少年儿童参加学习。拥有16所分校（branch）和6,000多位学生的上海少年艺术学校（Shanghai Children’s ArtSchool）规模最大。(2) 学习收获：家长依据孩子的不同兴趣将他们送入不同的业余艺校，学习音乐、舞蹈、绘画和书法（calligraphy）。孩子们学到了不少书本上学不到的新知识。 (3) 发展前景：这种新型学校得到许多家长的支持，必将越办越好。需要注意的有：(1) 要有标题。(2) 介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。 (3) 介绍的长度为80—120个词。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达使用了三段式结构，开门见山地点明了环境问题和全球变暖问题；第二段说明了我们应该采取的措施然后发出号召。本文的亮点是运用了恰当的关联词；句式和定语从句等结构的运用也为文章增添了亮色，按照要求的要点一一写出了，并且简洁。长度也在要求的范围内。