人生在世，犯错在所难免，关键是对待错误的态度

【答案】

We ,human beings, are not always correct in out life. It is normal for us to make mistakes at one time of another.

Despite the fact that we all make mistakes, what counts most is the altitudes towards them,which vary from person to person. Some people are clever enough to make full use of the experiences and avoid the same mistakes next time. On the contrary, others might just ignore the consequeces of their mistakes and go farther and farther on the wrong path.

In my opinion, there is no shame in making mistakes. What we need to do is to recognize out mistakes and learn from them. Take Thomas Edison for example, he made many mistakes and experienced lots of failure while experimenting with different materials for the light bulb. But he was brave enough to face up to them and accumulated some beneficial experience. Eventually, he succeeded in finding the most suitable material. From this example, we can learn that no one is perfect and leaning from mistakes can make us wiser that before.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语make mistakes 犯错；make full use of充分利用；in one’s opinion在某人看来；take ..for example以。。为例；succeed in doing sth成功做成某事；Despite the fact that we all make mistakes, what counts most is the altitudes towards them,which vary from person to person 这个句子that引导同位语从句，what引导主语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句；From this example, we can learn that no one is perfect and leaning from mistakes can make us wiser that before.这个句子that引导宾语从句，learning动名词做主语；