2.部分学生认为步行或骑自行车是比较好的方式，环保又健身

【答案】

We had a discusion about whether we should be sent to school or not. We have two main ideas.

Some students think that it can save the students’ time if parents send them to school. And parents want to make sure the students are safe, especially when the weather is terrible.

However, our city is more and more crowded and polluted, so other students think going to school on foot or by bike is the best way . First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for our health.  What’s more, if we walk,or ride a bike, There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving help make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now.

I hope more and more students will go to school on foot or by bike.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照讨论的结果描述并发表自己的看法，我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含父母开车送学生上学的优缺点、走路（骑车）去上学的优点、并表达出你自己的观点等，语言要诚恳、有说服力，表达出自己的希望。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第一、三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的衔接和过度，要符合句子间的逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文系统、全面地阐明了自己对于家长开车送孩子上学和步行上学的利弊，表达出了自己的最终倡议，文中包含了提纲的基本信息，并发挥了适当的想象。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含形容词比较级和非谓语动词的准确使用为文章增色不少.文中句与句和段与段的衔接和过度更加自然，如First of all What’s more,学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。