【题目】阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇120词左右的英语短文。
A group of frogs were travailing through the woods. And two of them fell into a deep pit. When the other frogs saw how deep the pit was, they told the two that they were as good as dead. The two frogs didn’t listen and tried to jump out of the pit with all their might. The other frogs kept telling them to stop. Finally, one of the frogs heard what other frogs were saying and gave up, so he died.
The other frog went on jumping as hard as he could. Once again, the other frogs cried at him and told him to stop and just allow himself to die. He jumped even harder and finally made himself out. When he got out, the other frogs said,“ Didn’t you hear us?” the frog explained to them that something was wrong with his hearing. He thought they were encouraging him the whole time.
There is power of life and death in the tongue. An encouraging word to someone who is down can lift him or her up and help them make it through the day. Be careful what you say. Speak life to those who cross your path. The power of words --- anyone can speak bad words that rob another of the spirit to go on in difficult times. But an encouraging word can go such a long time.
【写作内容】 以约150个词就“ 语言的力量”发表你的看法和感受，内容包括：
1. 语言在生活中的真负面影响；
2. 举一个发生在你或你认识的人身上的例子，说明语言的正或负 面的影响。
3.日常生活中我们应该如何利用好语言，让语言产生积极的影响。
【写作要求】 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
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【答案】
We use words every day but not all of us realize their powerful influence. A student will spare no efforts to study because of others’ inspiring words. On the country, if he is told that there is no possibility for him to succeed, he may really give up and end up as a failure totally.
My friend Jim had a traffic accident and got severely hurt. Though the chances for his recovery were little, her mother decided to tell him a lie in order to cheer him up. It was the power of words that actually helped her stand up and walk again.
In conclusion, when faced with negative and discouraging remarks, we ought to turn a deaf ear to them as they will destroy our hope and faith. What matters more to us are those positive words that make us highly inspired and motivated. In the meantime, give our positive words to people around us because they will give us theirs in return.
【解析】
试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语spare no efforts to不遗余力做某事；give up放弃；tell sb a lie说谎；In conclusion综上所述；turn a deaf ear to充耳不闻；It was the power of words that actually helped her stand up and walk again这个句子运用到强调句；In conclusion, when faced with negative and discouraging remarks, we ought to turn a deaf ear to them as they will destroy our hope and faith.这个句子中运用到faced非谓语动词做状语；What matters more to us are those positive words that make us highly inspired and motivated.这个句子what引导主语从句；
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