内容提示：我叫Andy，14岁

【答案】

My lifestyle

Hello, I’m Andy. I am 14 years old. I will introduce my lifestyle to you. I have good eating and living habits. I like playing basketball and I play basketball every day. I want to be a basketball player when I grow up. I usually have an egg, a cup of milk for breakfast. For lunch and supper, I usually have meat and vegetables. I like drinking milk because I need much energy. I don’t like sweet things because I think they are bad for health.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以Andy的身份，介绍一下自己的饮食和生活习惯。题目中给出了我们具体的写作内容，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。在教材中我们接触过类似介绍生活习惯的短文，因此写作时我们可以仿照课文中的短文来叙述，学生们对表达所需要的词汇和句型也都比较熟悉，如for breakfast/lunch/dinner；have/drink等，写起来会比较得心应手。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应使用一般现在时态、第一人称I来叙述。写作时，注意语句之间的连接，使文意更加连贯。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文中包括了题目中给出的所有要点，内容完整，结构清晰。作者先做了自我介绍，然后介绍了自己的生活和饮食的习惯；其次这篇短文使用了正确的时态和人称，句式表达也符合英语的表达规范；最后短文中使用了一些较好的句型，如I will introduce my lifestyle to you、I like playing basketball and I play basketball every day、I want to be a basketball player when I grow up、like drinking milk because I need much energy.等。