并且给出了相关信息

【答案】

Dear Yangyang,

I have studied English in Churchill Language School for a week. Everything goes well. My classmates are very kind to me and the teachers is also friendly but very strict . But I think it’s helpful and good for me . Though I have learned English for some time, I’m still weak in listening and speaking . To improve my English, I’m trying some ways , such as watching English TV programme, listening to the tape , asking the teacher for help and so on . They are very useful. Now my English is getting better and better . I hope I will talk with you in English when I come back home.

Best wishes.

Yours ,

Amy Chen

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给定材料作文，文章内容十分明确。并且给出了相关信息。在写作时，主要文章的结构要清晰，不要漏掉信息点。可以以第一人称写，写作时要注意句子的完整性，做到主谓一致。可以适当使用一些连词，使文章更紧凑，逻辑更清晰。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文章用到了一些好的句型So everyone should do something to save our environment.；we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.

等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。