书面表达(15分)假如你叫Mike，暑假里你去了泰山旅游

【答案】

My name is Mike, I went to Mount Tai in my summer vacation. The scenery there is very beautiful. I took quite a few photos there, and ate delicious food. Although I had a lot of fun, I felt very tired. So I decide to make a health plan. I decide to exercise at least 3 to 5 times a week, do not eat junk food, because it’s not healthy. I am going to use the Internet at most twice a week, because I think it is not good for my eyes. At the same time, I’m going to help to do housework, and go to the dentist for teeth cleaning.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据所提供的信息，用所给定的人物，写一篇旅游经历。谈一下自己的所作所为，以及所感。并制定一份健康计划。不要漏掉所提供的每一个信息，可适当发挥，要求条理清楚，语意连贯，书写规范，并能把握时态的正确运用。写旅游经历，应该用一般过去时态，制定计划，可根据写作的方式，运用一般现在时态或一般将来时态。

写作亮点：本文写作思路清晰，特别是一些连词的运用，比如：and, although, so, because等，使语意更加连贯，并适当发挥，加入了个人的一些观点：because it’s not healthy. because I think it is not good for my eyes.使文章内容更加丰富。时态运用也很得当。更为难能可贵的是通篇文章没有出现任何语法错误。