本篇基础写作是介绍第一个在NBA打球的华裔球员—林书豪

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Born in California ,the US on August 23rd,1988，Jeremy Lin is the first Chinese-American to  play in the NBA. He is 191cm in height and weighs 91kgs. When he was in high school, Jeremy Lin led his school team to win the state championship. After graduating from Harvard University, he began to play in the NBA in 2010. In February2012,Jeremy Lin attracted the world's attention because of his wonderful performance on the basketball court and he is regarded as one of the most popular players in the world.

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试题分析：本篇基础写作是介绍第一个在NBA打球的华裔球员—林书豪。因为介绍的是学生们较熟悉的人物，而且提供的信息较全，所以学生们不至于无话可说。但是要求只用五句话表述出来，这就要求学生有较高的语言组织能力，应该适当使用复合句或者短语等帮助把内容表达清楚全面。此外还要注意介绍人物时的先后顺序和时态的正确使用。

【亮点说明】此篇书面表达用多样化的句式结构涵盖了所有提供的信息，比如非谓语Born in California,US on August 23rd,1988，时间状语从句When he was in high school,介词短语After graduating from Harvard University和最后很长的一个并列句。这些都显示了作者非常高的遣词造句、组织语言的能力。