思路二：具体情况具体分析

对于条件比较差的年轻人来说，他们很难找到足够的时间来帮助改善社区因为他们没有选择只能不遗余力的赚更多的钱，甚至以牺牲自己的身体健康为代价。

With regard to young people in poor and backward areas, hardly could they have enough time to make contributions to the improvement of their communities on account of the fact that they have no options but to pull out all their stops to earn more money even at the cost their health. There are myriads of examples in our lives, one of which is my elder brother, a high school graduate, working as a waiter in a restaurant in Beijing.

然而，对于那些来自经济比较发达地区的年轻人来说，很容易想象他们中绝大部分人愿意在社区改善中扮演非常积极的角色。首先，他们更强烈的意识到和谐社区的必要性；其次，不断提高的生活水平使得他们不必成为最基础的需求担心，主要问题或许集中在通过改善社区获得新的成就感。

However, when it comes to the youth in economically advanced/vibrant areas, it takes little imagination to think that a majority of them are willing to play an active role in bettering their neighborhoods.Granted, helping the community| Voluntary work is not the only factor to consider in their spare time, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those young people from affluent families, thanks mainly to the strong desire to escape the ennui of home and to find identity, and also to the sense of self-fulfillment gained in such kind of activities. It is much easier for the parents to raise children now than fifty years ago.

To achieve successful development of a country, a government should focus its budgets more on young children education than on higher education?

题型：二元素对比类

话题：教育类

分析：从涉及到主题出发，比如老师、学生、家长、国家的角度进行讨论

Today people cannot buy products based on information in their advertisements because advertisements are less honest than before.

题型： 今昔对比类

话题： 商业类

思路： 一边倒，但是从公司和个人两个角度进行分析

First of all, there is no denying that fewer and fewer companies would like to allure their customers through deceptive ads since the benefits of such kind of market activities pales into insignificance when set against their huge negative impact.Furthermore, at the individual level, with the advent of popularity of the internet, especially the introduction of all kinds of applications, an increasing number of consumers have come to the rude awakening that most of ads are at best informative and at worst misleading.

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