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2019年1月12日雅思考官范文
When new towns are planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time in. Do you agree or disagree?
本期又是一篇典型的社会生活类的观点型大作文,这种类型的大作文要求考生对于某一个观点发表支持或者反对意见。此篇范文中,采用了一边倒的结构。一边倒结构是指,完全同意或者完全不同意某一观点。
比如,这篇文章中,对于城市中是建设公园和运动设施更重要还是建设商场更重要的话题展开讨论,作者全篇文章都表达了:公园和运动设施对于居民的重要性。一边倒结构中,开头段交代背景引出争议,其次表达自己的观点。
Modern shopping malls are available everywhere in the cities of today. These shopping centers make local resident’s lives easier. However, in many towns there is a dearth of public parks and sports facilities. I am of the opinion when designing and building new towns, planning officials should give more consideration to the provision of public parks and sports facilities, than ubiquitous malls.
主体段分段叙述同意理由,其中作者运用序数词,使文章逻辑层次更加清晰明了,正确的使用序数词是大作文考试中的得分点之一。
Firstly, in todays busy world it’s easy to become stressed out living in the urban jungle. People need places to hang out, meet friends and just chill. Public parks are ideal places for workers to relax during a busy working day. Having lunch or dozing in the sunshine can provide relief from having a lot on your plate in the workplace.
Secondly, the provision of more sports facilities is also crucial for the wellbeing of the population. As work becomes more sedentary and people suffer from obesity, the provision of gyms and other facilities like swimming pools becomes a no-brainer.
Consequently, with the rapid development of e-commerce and working from home we might see a radical change away from city centers full of shopping malls. Planners need to factor in the increased leisure time many people are enjoying nowadays. This suggests that the provision of public parks and sports facilities will take on a greater importance over and above shopping malls.
结尾段作者重申自己的观点并且总结上文。
In conclusion, I agree that providing more access to public parks and sports facilities is an essential element when designing a new town. These will significantly impact on the modern citizens’ lifestyle and create good PR for the cities in question.
By Dr Rob Burton
整篇文章条理清晰用词多样化,充分展现了作者的词汇运用能力,其中,范文中所呈现的写作结构在“启德考培2018雅思标准化教学资料的强化段第六课”有详细地介绍。社会生活类文章的写作技巧也会在标准化教学资料中有详细地讲解。(文末有福利哦
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启德考培老师在范文中还特地标记了一些重点词汇供各位童鞋学习借鉴,同时也给大家做了相应的解释说明并贴心的配有例句哦!(这么细心的老师哪里找)
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