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发布时间:2019-01-25 上海启德
2019年1月19日雅思考官范文
Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
这是一篇经典的传媒类的观点型大作文,这种类型的大作文要求考生对于某一个观点发表支持或者反对意见。因此观点型大作文一般分为两种写作结构,一边倒结构和让步结构。让步结构是:承认某行为,看法有可取(不足)之处的情况下,依然不同意(同意);所谓一边倒结构,就是完全同意(或不同意)某一观点。
Nowadays, people find the latest news on the internet rather than traditional sources such as newspapers. I argue that electronic news sources will eventually supplant the old fashioned hardcopy such as newsprint.
如这篇范文,作者在开头段表示认为电子媒体最终会替代纸质媒体的地位。
However, firstly, newspapers do remain an important source of news especially for the older generation. Like my grandfather, older people still prefer to read their news this way. They have bought and read newspapers over the years and old habits die hard.
Secondly, in addition, newspapers often come with supplements, such as magazines, television guides, and sources of entertainment, such as crosswords and puzzles. This makes them more attractive for some than going online.
While newspapers may not disappear completely, the Internet has become a dominant source of information and news. For younger people, like myself, we read the news on the go, not just sitting and poring over the news. We don't even have to pay for it. We also need to take into account the cost of producing news print. It is an expensive business often depending upon advertising revenue to stay afloat. Posting news online is a much more attractive option for many news companies and it also offers flexibility in it's offering and can change minute by minute as situations evolve.
然而在主体段时,作者先叙述了纸质媒体的优点,接着陈述了虽然纸质媒体没有完全消失但是电子媒体已经占据了主要的地位,因此这篇文章使用了让步结构。
使用让步结构时,作者首先在首段引出争议且表达了自己的观点,其次分别用两个主体段陈述自己的观点,且每一个观点后加1-2个支持句。
其中,主体段1中作者使用了序数词,使得文章层次更加鲜明,正确的使用序数词也是考生在写作考试中的得分点之一。
In conclusion, although newspapers remain popular today with the older demographic, I believe they will gradually be replaced by electronic sources. It a sad loss to see such a proud industry bought to its knees, but unfortunately, the rise of the internet and online, up to the minute news is an unavoidable development.
By Dr Rob Burton
同样地,文章末尾为考生提供了这篇范文中的优秀词汇和短语供大家学习和积累。观点型大作文的写作技巧和写作结构在“启德考培 2018 雅思标准化教学资料”的强化段第六课有详细地讲解和介绍。传媒类文章的写作技巧和也会在标准化教材中有详细地讲解。(文末有福利哦)
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启德考培老师在范文中还特地标记了一些重点词汇供各位童鞋学习借鉴,同时也给大家做了相应的解释说明并贴心的配有例句哦!
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