Nowadays men's sports are given far more attention by the society compared to women's sports. What are the reasons for that? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? 

题目大意

男性运动在社会中所受到的关注远高于女性。为什么？这是一个积极还是消极的影响？

写作思路解析

男女身体状态的差异性导致了社会对两种性别的体育运动产生差异，而这很难判断是好是坏。

1.身体差异导致运动关注度不同：

在身体技能上，男性通常要比女性更加有力量，而这种在身体上的优越性使得男性女性在从事体育活动时的表现结果不同：男性往往在运动中更加具有观赏性，因为他们更容易让观众感受到激烈和视觉刺激。这种差异性使得男性运动员的关注度更高，而也因此获得更多商业投资和商业运行，从而产生社会的重视差异。

2.这并不见得是个整体的坏事：

这是一个自然而然的过程和现象，即便这种差异可能会使得女性运动领域萧条，因为女性会发现他们在这个领域可能受到与男性从业者不同的待遇，但实际上真正从事体育运动的这些女性并不是仅仅在用经济资源来满足他们自身，而真正让她们关注的实际上是由体育所带来的成就感和回报。她们仍然受到关注，即便不如男性那样多，但这同时也可能净化了女性运动领域，真正留下来的都是热爱体育的人，而不是为了一些不正当的目的。

高分写作示范

I believe that the true reasons lying behind the different attentions between male and female athleticism, though sometimes misguided, are still direct and understandable; however, the outcome of this is never easy to be considered positive or negative. 

While there are always people out there, sadly, holding extreme views in terms of the sexual discrimination, this, from what I see, is certainly not the truth. Feminists may easily link the lopsided focuses to the unequal rights for the both genders, accusing more privileges enjoyed by man and blame that the entire society takes this trend for granted. There is certainly no need to be such extreme and pessimistic, because the differentiation just sources from the physical conditions; men and women are physiologically behaving differently in most sports activities, and the differences in the final performances then lead to the leaned preferences. Male sportsmen, are always more powerful and stronger than women in their bodies, and that makes the competition of the former more attractive because what the audience wants in their watching is always the most powerful, dramatical and conflictive scenarios in athleticism—the viewers are always excited to see persons break the physiological limit that is extremely far beyond what people can imagine, and fight with their rivals who are with more outstanding, say, explosive forces or spring abilities. Therefore, it is not surprising that male sports professionals are gaining closer attentions: people are more visually satisfied and investors are then more likely to pour their money on male practitioners, since a larger proportion of focuses would bring about more commercial values. The aforementioned trend, ergo, is certainly based on different body potentials one can present, but not the biases—there are also areas, e.g. fashion, that favor women more, since they can generate more profits by their edges and own giftedness; physical quality prevails.

This phenomenon is then hard to be judged in terms of its merits or blights, but is somewhere in the middle, since it happens naturally, and hasn’t, by far, prompted any direct harms or contributions to either sex. Some may fear that if the male sportsmen still overwhelm the athletic fields, they may be fed with more money than those females who are striving for a same level of achievement; this is mainly because males can gain a larger quantity of investment and public exposure if they are preferred—they are more likely to be put into commercials and advertisements—and that is supposed to lead to a lack of confidence of those females who devote themselves into the sports career. The reality is, however, that the deficiency in terms of such marginal benefits never decides the emergence of truly outstanding female athletes: what they want is a life pursue with the refunds of not only financial resources, but also the sense of fulfilment and achievement. They surely have understandable payments based on what they have done, they gain their reputation and pay off whenever they are setting up new records, and they do harvest what they want because there are still admirers who are willing to giving out their applauses to their heroic moments, no matter what gender they are; the attentions may be less, but this also, to some extent, purifies the female sports atmosphere—practitioners do this for their own enthusiasm, but not other deviated purposes. 

In conclusion, I would certainly believe that the true reason of why men and women attract lopsided attentions in the sports field is made by their physical differences, and that is hard to be considered a negative development.