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雅思大作文7分范文及解析:不认识邻居

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发布时间:2020-01-07 石家庄朗阁

There is an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbors, what causes this situation? How to solve?

There is an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbors, what causes this situation? How to solve?

(题目来源:2012年6月16日大陆雅思大作文)


题目大意

现在有越来愈多的人不认识他们的邻居。是什么原因导致的?怎么解决?


写作思路

这道题目是陈述性题目。邻居在原来是多么的亲切多么的可爱啊。至少在老师小的时候是这样的。现在冷漠的不行,在大城市不要说打招呼,看到都装作没看见,更别说聊天。很多因素导致这个现象。社会的,科技的,生活的,隐私的等等等等。总归现在的人与人关系确实比过去要冷漠的多。


审题,找出关键词/限定词

Increasing number,限定词,numerous等


高分范文

There is a growing perception that a neighbor is more like a stranger next door in contemporary society. Apparently, that kind of friendliness which existed in grandparents' neighborhood is replaced by that of ignorance, or even indifference. This essay will examine reasons for this problem and propose according solutions.


What might have contributed to this negative tendency could be that today's young neighbors prefer not to get acquainted with each other, and that modern housing designs also prevent such communication from happening. Modern people tend to live in blocks of apartment where there are few public places to hold group activities. As a result, the residents will feel isolated and have no chance to communicate with neighbors.Also,modern citizens usually immerse themselves in a fast-paced way of life. As most of them have a heavy workload, they prefer staying at home and browsing the Internet by themselves, after they return from work, to chatting with their neighbors.In addition, moving and relocating their households also reduces the time of having a light conversation with their neighbors.


Moreover, there are many and various forms of entertainment, such as playing online games and being involved in a party, so few people would like to spend time taking a stroll in the community, which is another reason giving rise to the unfamiliarity between  neighbors.


To start with, architects should add more public spaces into modern residential buildings. Thus, it enables residents to participate in more community activities, strengthening the ties between neighbors.And those who have a heavy workload are supposed to spend part of their free time getting involved in these activities so as to build a desirable relationship with people who live next door.Apart from what have been mentioned above, the community council should be responsible for holding more group activities, encouraging residents to communicating and interacting with each other. Community activities can be organized by community schools, concentrating on the matters of common interest or concern.


In conclusion, a good relationship with neighbors and a strong sense of community benefit each resident in a community. Although we can hardly reduce the time spent on work or academic study, we are able to make better use of our spare time to develop strong ties with our neighbors and community.


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