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雅思写作:小作文数据实现形态

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发布时间:2019-04-12 广州雅思英语学校

静态数据描写句型,句型变化的核心:变化主语,添花:复杂句的使用。

1. 图表作文中具体数据在句子中的位置

(1)放在句子开头,修饰主语事物,然后主语事物发出具体动作或状态,注意具体数据直接加名词,比例系数加of加名词?10 million people voted in the election.

?A quarter of the population voted.

?25% of people voted in the election.

(2)放在句子后,以“某某某东西的量是多少”的句法去引导,注意某东西的修饰语用到定语从句或非谓语动词

?The number of people who voted in the election was 10 million.

?The proportion of the population that voted was a quarter.

?The figure for people who voted in the election was 25%.

(3)用括号显示

?The number of people who voted in the election was shockingly high (10 million).

?A small proportion of people (10%) voted in the election.

2. 图表作文中具体数据在句子中的表现形态

?百分比的数据可以用几分之几的方式来转换,或者约等于某一个整值。

如31% = almost a third,79% = approximately four out of five

?数位值庞大但不整齐的数字可以约等于某一个整值

如7956 = around eight thousand

?阿拉伯数字可以与单词拼写写法互换

如400 = four hundred,46% = forty-six percent

表达大小:

例:in 2011, the youth unemployment in UK:20%; in Germany: 10%

More than/ higher than (基础)

用名词选项作主语:

In 2011, the youth unemployment rate in the

更精确:

In 2011, the youth unemployment rate in the

用国家作主语:

The UK shared a higher proportion of youth unemployment than Germany ,with 20% and 10%, respectively.

更精确:

The UK shared a two times higher proportion of youth unemployment than Germany ,with 20% and 10%, respectively.

用数据作主语:

In 2011, 20% young people in the UK got unemployed, which was higher than Germany where only 10% of them in the same situation.

用特殊词汇:Overtake/exceed/outnumber(表达超过,主语常用名词选项表达的数量,请注意outnumber的用法)

The number of unemployed youngster in the UK overtook/exceeded that in Germany ,with 20% and 10%, respectively.

Youngsters getting unemployed in the UK outnumbered that in Germany ,with 20% and 10%, respectively.

用特殊句型(高分句型)

The number of unemployed youngsters in the UK constituted 20%, which smaller proportion of young adults getting in the same situation in Germany , at 10%.

用表达倍数的词汇:

Double/triple/quadruple

Bexxx times

The proportion of youth unemployment in the UK doubledthat in Germany in 2011, with 20% and 10% respectively.

句型变化:In 2011, the proportion of youth unemployment in the UK was 20%, whichdoubled the percentage in Germany(10%).

The proportion of youth unemployment in the UK was two timesthat in Germany in2011, with 20% and 10%, respectively.

句型变化:In 2011, the proportion of youth unemployment in the UK was 20%, which was two times the percentage in Germany(10%).

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