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发布时间:2019-04-12 广州雅思英语学校
1. 图表作文中具体数据在句子中的位置
(1)放在句子开头,修饰主语事物,然后主语事物发出具体动作或状态,注意具体数据直接加名词,比例系数加of加名词?10 million people voted in the election.
?A quarter of the population voted.
?25% of people voted in the election.
(2)放在句子后,以“某某某东西的量是多少”的句法去引导,注意某东西的修饰语用到定语从句或非谓语动词
?The number of people who voted in the election was 10 million.
?The proportion of the population that voted was a quarter.
?The figure for people who voted in the election was 25%.
(3)用括号显示
?The number of people who voted in the election was shockingly high (10 million).
?A small proportion of people (10%) voted in the election.
2. 图表作文中具体数据在句子中的表现形态
?百分比的数据可以用几分之几的方式来转换,或者约等于某一个整值。
如31% = almost a third,79% = approximately four out of five
?数位值庞大但不整齐的数字可以约等于某一个整值
如7956 = around eight thousand
?阿拉伯数字可以与单词拼写写法互换
如400 = four hundred,46% = forty-six percent
表达大小:
例:in 2011, the youth unemployment in UK:20%; in Germany: 10%
More than/ higher than (基础)
用名词选项作主语:
In 2011, the youth unemployment rate in the
更精确:
In 2011, the youth unemployment rate in the
用国家作主语:
The UK shared a higher proportion of youth unemployment than Germany ,with 20% and 10%, respectively.
更精确:
The UK shared a two times higher proportion of youth unemployment than Germany ,with 20% and 10%, respectively.
用数据作主语:
In 2011, 20% young people in the UK got unemployed, which was higher than Germany where only 10% of them in the same situation.
用特殊词汇:Overtake/exceed/outnumber(表达超过,主语常用名词选项表达的数量,请注意outnumber的用法)
The number of unemployed youngster in the UK overtook/exceeded that in Germany ,with 20% and 10%, respectively.
Youngsters getting unemployed in the UK outnumbered that in Germany ,with 20% and 10%, respectively.
用特殊句型(高分句型):
The number of unemployed youngsters in the UK constituted 20%, which smaller proportion of young adults getting in the same situation in Germany , at 10%.
用表达倍数的词汇:
Double/triple/quadruple
Bexxx times
The proportion of youth unemployment in the UK doubledthat in Germany in 2011, with 20% and 10% respectively.
句型变化:In 2011, the proportion of youth unemployment in the UK was 20%, whichdoubled the percentage in Germany(10%).
The proportion of youth unemployment in the UK was two timesthat in Germany in2011, with 20% and 10%, respectively.
句型变化:In 2011, the proportion of youth unemployment in the UK was 20%, which was two times the percentage in Germany(10%).