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发布时间:2019-05-05 广州雅思英语学校
1、强调宾语的时候,再用被动语态
虽然长难句能够表明写作水平,但是清晰明了的表达才是关键。例如:
In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather"s family.
本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather"s family”,而使用了被动语态后,仿佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是主动语态,相对来说更简洁一些:
In the fall, my grandfather"s family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.
2、强调宾语的时候,再用被动语态
虽然长难句能够表明写作水平,但是清晰明了的表达才是关键。例如:
In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather"s family.
本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather"s family”,而使用了被动语态后,仿佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是主动语态,相对来说更简洁一些:
In the fall, my grandfather"s family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.
3. 避免频繁使用“there be”结构。
例如下面的句子:
There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.
可以改为:
My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.
更简洁的句式为:
My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.
4. 把从句改为短语或单词。
例如:
Dairy cows were raised on the farm,which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.
简介的表达方式为:
The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers tothe nearest university.
5. 用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语。
例如下面这句话:
My grandfather didn"t have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.
Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达,即loiter:
My grandfather didn"t have time to loiter with his school friends.