北木教育 > 出国考试 > 出国考试文章 > 写作提分秘籍:更换表达,提高句子质量
发布时间:2019-04-02 郑州优择教育
写作和口语属于不同的语体,用词造句都有不同。我们要在有足够词汇量积累的情况下,用比较高级一点的词汇和语法替换掉简单词和简单句,这样文章会看起来更加书面,质量瞬间就上来了。久而久之,写作习惯就会改变,雅思写作、托福写作的分数自然而然就上去了。来看看怎么将简单句变得高级吧~
For example, you work in a big factory.
Improved: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
Improved: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
Improved: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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Everyone will have many friends in his life.
Improved: Everyone has friends in his life.
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People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
Improved: People are never too old to learn.
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Money can improve their living standard.
Improved: Money can improve their life.